I also have my Xbox which is of the things I play when Im not doing anything. It's very clean and healthy room,well it wouldnt be clean without my mother, of course, sometimes you just need her to boss you around. On the far wall where the window is there is beautiful multi-coloured painting of a cow and in the right hand wall there is a small built in wardrobe with a mirror on one of the doors and on the other there is the same deep sea green as on my feature wall. Their curtains black out light, their chairs all face the television, theres surround sound speakers, and of course theres an enormous flat screen TV on the wall! Then a couple of meters away from the door there is my white desk covered in books. Overall I give you a 4. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. The double bed is messey and not the new. I have this there because well I play games alot. Another factor of how my room can look so messy is because of the creamy white colored walls! I have a table in my room strewn with fly tying equipment and materials, it shows that I like fishing. Really good George, there were no spelling mistakes I could see. It looks good with all the light colours fitted into my room, and with the dark blankets covering my bed. At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! I have the white bedside table right next to my bed because well i need something to put my drink on, and I think that's the same for my sister. As you enter my bedroom the first thing you see is the large divider that sits in the middle of my room separating my sister and I. ALYSSAS BEDROOM It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. The best metaphors come from the heart. In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. In general, one might get the idea that metaphors are preferred to describe a bad user experience rather than a good one. Jakes Bedroom The bed is positioned next to a wall-sized sliding door. Write a detailed description of your bedroom as you left it this morning. Pagkakaiba ng pagsulat ng ulat at sulating pananaliksik? I try make my room a beach theme because I love going to the beach. The bedframe has a big headboard and a smaller board at my feet. It has the swirls because it gives the texture a bit more kick when you look at it and because my gran & Gran dad liked it that way. Color, my room has color in the right spot my walls match my carpet the carpet matches the color of my beds wood underneath the mattress and my bed matches my dutchess. Examples of Popular Metaphors All the worlds a stage, and all the men and women merely players. William Shakespeare I am the good shepherdand I lay down my life for the sheep. The Bible, John 10:14-15 All our words are but crumbs that fall down from the feast of the mind.Khalil Gibran your bedroom is like the inside of your head (simile). The typical teenage boys room is a disaster area. People are sliding down the stairs, someone has a toy train set out, and someone else is playing with dolls on the front step. From an outside point of view, it seems to be arranged in an orderly fashion. You used the write amount of good words in the right places. My bed is a king slat bed with black duvet sheets and black pillow cases (would like some new ones). You can sign in to vote the answer. The second one is abstract art that I made about a year ago when I was bored, and the third one is a tree with a swing, I made it when I was year 6 and I entered it into the amp show and I got 2nd. You need to work on capital letters (eg. Old knick knacks made of glass and metal dotted around to add a more homely feel. However, if you cautiously open the drawer, it looks as if a bomb has exploded inside. I have two paintings in my room, one of a cat with glasses on and one of two dogs in a mug (these still need to be put up). I really enjoy your description jake I can visualize your bedroom very well. But to make space is easy because all I have to do is put it in random drawers sometimes. Although there are many flaws in my room, Im still tolerating them. Now, the layout. My bed sits in the very middle of the room, while my large dresser, containing all of my clothes, is tucked in beside it. Tropical, Sporty, Comfy, Tidy and Spacious. you have a done good job with your spelling and punctuation. Now I am going to move on to my senses. I have a gray shelving unit and an old looking bed side table. Theres room to improve. My bedroom is facing west and is on the far side of the house. well done, BRIDGETS BEDROOM My golly gosh it's apigsty Ill be honest its like a pig lives in their. My king-single bed is placed directly in the middle of my room with my dresser, containing all of my clothes, on the left hand side. On the top end there is two pillows and a bundle of pijamas. Feedback - Overall I quite liked your writing and it's not to detailed but it has some in there and the description you used was great. There's flower patterns everywhere and unique designs on my furniture. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. It also has another mattress underneath that has wheels on it. I like spending time in my room, because I like having my own space and its a good place to be by myself. as you described your room with a theme 'NBA' yes there are some elements of that but if you ask me, its not in plain sight! Feedback - It's good that you have the nouns and you have a bit of detail in them but add more. There are two mirrors in the room the one im going to describe is the one connected to a table in my room. It also has a table which is made from birch. Firstly, in my opinion I think that this bedroom is the best for my kind of personality. The colors of my room are dark and a little bit of white. Very well written. Great writing. There are ups and downs but it is where I feel safe and calm. When I get up in the morning to go to school, or after a big sleep-in, my toes touch the soft dark carpet. The spelling and Grammar was good and no spelling mistakes but you could use some more descriptive words. Feels very hot. Sometimes I come home and I see the floor for once because my Mum hates the mess I make in the room. When I look out the window I also see the mountains and some time you can see car lights on the side of the mountain when it is dark. Required fields are marked *. It was a good description of your room I rely could visualized what the room looked like. My bedroom, a place of comfort and rest. I didn't find any spelling errors, but there was a mistake where there was no space between a full stop and the start of a sentence in paragraph 3. Your description was enjoyable to read. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. No one can get in except for me. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. You might walk in and say, Why is my home a Christmas tree? A wooden bedside table [that I mention before.] Your next step is to improve your grammar and punctuation. I have some great accessories in my room that can give you a story about my personality. You have done well to describe your room. Brown that stands out because of the shine. what is commonly misdiagnosed as pink eye. On the far side of my room is an old desk that needs getting rid of because all it does is collect dust. There is a leather chest that I dump all my clothes on, and a bunch of tools and motorbike gear in the gray shelving unit. Johns suggestion was just a Band-Aid for the problem. My duvet is light blue with spots that are light pink, dark pink, turquoise and white.My bed is a king single and I find that it is a very convenient size. My pillow has different coloured stripes on it and it is very soft and comfy. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. Even though my room hasnt got much in it, my room is the tidiest bedroom there. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. As Ive already said I have a painting of Clifton Beach hanging above my bed, it is landscape and the colours combinations are awesome. On the rubric I would give you a R4. Secondly are my accessories I have many accessories in my room but there is three that stand out to me my PS4, tv and Headset. My bed is the main accessory in my room because it is in the center of the room up against my feature wall. But all of this mess isn't caused by me its made by my annoying, loud and messy sister (Well that's what I like to think) Jackson 2x4 Auto Darkening Lens, Nice story and good use of commas and punctuation. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. If you have a brother or sister whos bedroom is usually dark and smelly, you perhaps might call their bedroom a swamp, too! As you take a small tentative step through my bedroom door, the first thing you shall see is my old, wooden, glory box, that looks as though it has seen many times, both good and bad. The layout of my room is your everyday large square room allowing a big area to dot items around, such as a bright white, built in wardrobe, a comforting king single or the small baby blue couch. You might say that your home is a workplace or an office if you or your parents seem to always be working from home. Soft light brown that's how I describe my carpet it is really soft to walk on and gives you that welcome feeling. I'm serious it's a mess (I cleaned it yesterday) with clothes and toys all over the place. I also have 2 paintings on the wall, I used to have 3 but my nephew ripped one off so it is lying in my stuffed toy pit now. Stinky socks, crumpled papers and forgotten towels. Really good, some really good descriptive words and I could imagine it really well. On the wall is a black outlined photo frame with photos of me and my family and our holiday to Australia. Opposite the set of drawers is my build in wardrobe with my blue and red triangle patterned shelves.Also right in front of you as you walk in there is my big white window which is the main source of light. Although I dont really like the blue on my walls and the colour of my floor so itd be good if that could have a change. Awesome description of your room Alex. Two beds tucked in opposite corners, each with bedside tables and desks nearby for ease of use. I have to balance on my chair and Sams shelf to reach my dictionary! Overall I think my bedroom is nice and comfy, and I like it the way it is. I go in, close my eyes, breathe deep, and the world goes away. My bed is in the corner of my room because there is no other space for it to go. With the pastel colours and gold coloured curtains, it gives the room a lot of light. My desk is white with a long blue draw that matches my blue wall. If you are 13 years old when were you born? The delicate carpet instantly warms up my feet. But I would like to get rid of the hole and change the wallpaper, also I want a tv. On your left will be a built in cupboard for my clothes and other things. I like this description of your bed room. I liked your ideas, you thought of ideas then typed in down on your google doc. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. But it could be neater and all the belongings could be organised. All I can hear is my brothers music playing really loud and the sound of my dad telling me to clean my room. I have a small sized mat black H stuck to my wall with a pattern of turquoise and white dots and black and white dot bunting underneath. My wardrobe the mirror is all dusty with had prints all over it and inside it has rubbish, all my rugby gear, ski gear and more clothes. These are placed where there is one up and one down all along the top of the wall. The first thing about the layout in my room you notice is the large curtains covering the windows at the back and at the left of my room. The size of my bedroom is the smallest out of the rest of my families rooms, but I can still fit in everything I need into it. The thing i treasure is my lego bin because it contains my cool creations. My bed is in the corner of my room and is out of the way so you don't have to walk around it. My carpet has black and brown stripes and is squishy and soft. I am going to take you on a virtual trip around my room. My mum sees I have to clean my room each day. You used good description and your story was interesting. My room is big and there is lots of space to do fun activities like board games and flips. It use to be an old garage but was renovated into a bedroom that Im proud to call it mine. I think Emma used lots of punctuation and i liked haw she told us exactly were her room was. The vocobulary is very good aswell. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. Well done, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. I run to my room, upstairs on the left i jump onto my bed yes schools over I think to myself. The theme of my bedroom is simply my favourite things. There are multi-coloured paper butterflies scattered all over the pale purple walls, swarming in corners and perching on the edges of family photographs. But Im lucky enough to have an en suite attached to my room! Also I have light pink checked sheets. Lastly is the layout. I am glad you love your bedroom! Great descriptive peace of writing and it really felt like I was in your room. So to end it off I love my room it is fun to do trick shots in and playing with lego just in my closet I have a little bit of room so I want to place a chair in there with a lamp and have as my little private area so I can play on my ipod read books and also use it to hid from people when we are playing hide and seek with little kids. When I look walk inside my bedroom and look out the window I see the big pine trees blowing swiftly in the wind and the bed just waiting to be made since yesterday. But on the drawer top is a bit of mess, it holds my phone, a book, ipod and my lamp and behind my bed on my wall I have some posters. Then the bedside table is nearly crammed in the top left hand corner. Straight ahead there are windows facing east. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. You have described it so accurately. People say their home is their castle to create the sense that their home is the place where theyre the king. My bedroom is down the hallway of our house on your left. In the middle of my room up against the feature wall is my bed, its a Queen Double, with white outlines of hexagons and a grey background for my duvet and pillows. 4+. Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. Sometimes I don't even have enough space to use my massive laptop because all my pens and books and rubbish are in the way.I need to give it a good clean. Very well written. My bed is really messy, it would be rare to see it made. Although those are all of my creative accessories now. My bedroom, my bedroom is like my very own house all to me, no-one is allowed in without permission except the cat and dog (mainly the cat). It describes your room well. Good description Annie. Then there's the senses - smell, sight, sound, touch. I have a lot of space. An excellent description of your room Meg. Its normally just a mucked up pile of sheets and she is always nagging me to make my bed and or clean my room. Posters are another thing people have in their room, in my room I have one poster of a 3D of a coral reef. There is clothes such as shirts and shorts mixed in with stuffed toys and shoes. In my room I also have a painting the my Aunty drew for me, It is a huge field of wheat with huts in them but no people from what you can see. If your home was a classroom, you might imagine that you learned a lot around the house. It can survive an entire month of cleanliness before succumbing to the fall of clothes and chocolate wrappers. And it sits on the other side of the room! The sun shines in my room which makes my room warm up. My duvet has many colours and matches everything in my room, including my bright pink beanbag. The layout in my room is a very practical layout and is a well organised way to have it. My bedroom is the best place in the house because of the way that it gets the warmth of the sun, the way that it has my favorite colour as a feature wall and because everyone in my family is jealous of it. To the right of my bed is my set of wood stained brown patterned drawers with my guitar up against them. Overall it's ok but you repeat your facts. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. David Silverman Simpsons Net Worth, My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. You've really set the scene, invited us in and shown us how cosy it is in there. Good peace of writing. By my bed there is a book shelf on top it has a lamp and inside it has a variety of books, by the corner there is another book shelf and it has a green lava lamp on top and more books below. I like the fact that all your ideas were relevant and made sense to the topic. There is also a collection of photographs Ive taken in both Australia and New Zealand which is great because this ties together my two main cultures, these photos are surrendering my window and hanging above my desk. I think that my room is pretty cool because I have it all to myself and I have a lot of stuff in it, the carpet is pretty cool aswell. Ano ang pinakamaliit na kontinente sa mundo? We are governed by our disclaimer, terms and conditions and privacy policy listed at the bottom of this page. I do everything in my room, im pretty much always in there. The very bottom layer is a soft grey cover, the second one is the same colour then the 3rd layer is a soft bright red colour this is mostly for warmth through the winter the top layer has blue red white stripes on it and is big and fluffy my pillows also match this color. The layout of the room has a facing direction pointing at the north east with side on single beds one near the huge closets and one across near the sliding windows for the sun to enter. The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. I also have surfing posters around the room of surfers that I admire and aspire to be like someday. Great bedroom description Shadyn, I loved how you punctuated your sentences and it made it easy to read, you also have a good use of grammar. MY BEDROOM I have a built in wardrobe that has shelves in it where I can store my belongings. Also my bed is a queen which is always made with colorful sheets on It. My lampshade is very modern with its black and white zig zag pattern to match my zig zag patterned drawers. I love my room because you can just sit and read and just play. Will someone help me solve the following problem. It fits my school clothes, jerseys and other stuff. JAMES BEDROOM Really good, just a few punctuation mistakes. On my desk there lies a golden skull candle. This description is on how my room looks now with the layout, accessories, furniture and colours.
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